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GingerBread Man! – Group A
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2 responses to “GingerBread Man! – Group A”
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Matthew, your facial expressions really made this speech more interesting and easy to follow. It gets boring when people keep a static face with no smile or emotion.
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I love that you explored a story that was newer to you. You do a great job making this story your own, presenting it to us as your version of the story. You slip a little in the middle more toward telling us about the story; be careful with keeping the same mode throughout a narrative. With how this is framed, I know you are doing more with your lower body (I think purposefully and not just from nerves.) I’d love to be able to see that and encourage you to think more broadly about how you can use your whole body to present this narrative. Overall this was engaging and I appreciated how well you worked with looking at your camera, and your overall use of descriptive language.
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