Informative Speech Ahmed E


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5 responses to “Informative Speech Ahmed E”

  1. Nichelle Julius Gordon Avatar
    Nichelle Julius Gordon

    I liked how much evidence you gave to support your topic.

  2. Hibah Hashmi Avatar
    Hibah Hashmi

    I really like your speech. Your topic of accessibility is still relevant today. You provide really great evidence. My only suggestion would be to slow down a bit as you speak; I know this is something I struggle with too, so I completely understand! Other than that it was a great speech.

  3. Leonardo Avatar
    Leonardo

    The information that you presented in the body paragraph helped elevate your main idea of what you wanted to enforce. However, I want to see more of your body language and show yourself being more open than just your face and a bit more eye contact. It’s a very fast-paced speech on how you present everything and should be taken a bit more slowly.

  4. Bendly Avatar
    Bendly

    Hey Ahmed, You seem highly informed on your topic and your speech was pretty clear making it easy to digest the information. My suggestion would be to position your camera better so it does not look like we’re looking up at you.

  5. Liridona Hyseni Avatar
    Liridona Hyseni

    Hi Ahmed! I enjoyed listening to your speech as it was extremely informative and you were very knowledgable on your topic. I agree with Bendly about your camera positioning, but besides that great job!

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