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11 responses to “introduction”
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I’m sorry you weren’t feeling well when you recorded this. Lionesses are very cool animals. I like how you talked about their qualities of caring for their families and hard work. In what ways are those qualities reflected in you? How could you use this idea to give us a bit more of your background and sense of self? You’ve implied it here, but one thing a speech should try to do is make a clear connection between ideas for the listeners rather than relying on them to make it themselves.
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You did really well for doing this when not feeling well! I liked the qualities that you want to compare yourself to I think that is very beautiful.
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I love the idea of being a lioness. It sounds very empowering.
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Hey Su-dong! I am a psychology major as well and similarily I chose a lion.
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Su-Dony*
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A lioness is really cool!
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I like how you used a lion, lions are very powerful!
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I liked how even though you weren’t feeling well it didn’t conduct that in your speech. You pushed through just like a lioness.
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Hello! Yes, lions are cool!
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Hey Su-Dony. I hope you feel better, good job persevering and getting this speech done.
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Hello Su-Dony, Lions are pretty strong and just like you I hope you get stronger too!



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