Rosy Gadeh
Sep 9, 2024
introductory Speech
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10 responses to “introductory Speech”
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Nice job! I am also a big reader, so I appreciate the book metaphor and how you weaved it through your speech. The overall speech structure felt very polished. One thing that will help strengthen this kind of speech is balancing it more by adding specific details about yourself that correspond to those metaphors. For example, what kind of new things have you liked learning about? How is seeing yourself as someone people could turn to for advice perhaps related to what you study or do? This will help your speech be both more memorable and make your listener feel they have heard something that only you could tell them.
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Hello Rosy, I like your metaphor about the book and how your life is depicted by each page in the book. Great speech!
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Hi Rosy, Great speech, and the metaphor you mentioned perfected it, its nice to meet you
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Hi Rosy, you did a really good job and kept me very engaged with your speech. I also feel like you’ve had some experience with public speaking. You sound so professional and you seem like a natural at it.
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Hey Rosy, your accent is really cool and that immediately captivated my attention! It also felt like you were storytelling as I watched.
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Hi Rosy, it’s nice to meet you. I like your choice and I think I would also want to be an interesting and beneficial book.
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Hi Rosy, you did a great job speaking. I like the metaphor you used.
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I liked your inanimate object. A book is so unique and how different chapters can also correlate to life.
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Hi I can feel that the book is like a living animal.
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Hello Rosy I am glad that you want to be an influence on others and that you will achieve what you want to be in life. Comparing yourself to a book so that you can be a greater help to those in need is good!
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