Summary
The Three Little Pigs
Narrative Speech
Rosy Gadeh
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4 responses to “Rosy Gadeh”
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Hey Rosy,
I like your vibes while expressing the house, it is apparent and simple.
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There was great energy in this. I appreciated the way you differentiated the three pigs and their approach; it was very effective. Overall, you did an excellent job of not reading this to us for the most part. You were at your strongest when you were really looking at us and putting your voice into the storytelling. Telling a story with a repeated pattern like this can be challenging, especially without an audience. Don’t be afraid to exaggerate sometimes in the way that you are telling a story, not by changing the content but through your voice and action. I also thought it was a good choice for you to make at the end to say more about your story’s lesson as part of your telling.
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I really like this story and how you teach a lesson in the end.
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Very good story!
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