Cinderella
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6 responses to “Cinderella”
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Great storytelling.
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Hi Leslie! I love that you picked cinderella ( she was my favorite as a kid). Good story telling, in future speeches you can engage your audience through adding different tones or emphasis!
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Good job putting the pieces of this story together. What are you telling it from? Did you have an outline put together? There are moments when you make this your own, which I’d love to see you go further with. Really picture the story happening and that will help to build the connection and engagement with the listeners. Narratives are a great opportunity to help our listeners connect on an emotional level. How should they feel in key parts of the story and how can you help them get there? I’d love to see you stand up in your next speech, which will hopefully help you channel some of the nervous energy differently than where it is currently going, which is to twist side to side in the chair (a totally normal thing!)
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I liked how you told the story in your tone.
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Hello Leslie your story on Cinderella was quick and simplified even from the party to the end of the story with the climax of her in a rush leaving at midnight from prince charming
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Hey Leslie, I like how you took your time with this story and you really made it your own. It seemed like you were winging it though so it lacked a little organization but overall I love the twist you put on it.
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