Informative Speech by Adam Hasan
Why we should stop procrastinating
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3 responses to “Why we should stop procrastinating”
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Try to write your speech points in a way that allows you to better look up and engage with your audience through your camera lens. One thing that can help with that is to help guide your eye there by putting a big post it note next to it. The voice and tone here is very good. When you bring up a fact, be sure to give an oral citation, where does your statistic come from? In general, for an informative speech you want to weave these kind of points in throughout the speech As you conclude this speech, it becomes much more of a persuasive speech rather than staying in the informative territory. Make sure to really define your purpose as informative.
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Your speech was really great! I loved how in the beginning you made it feel so relatable. The only thing I’d say is to try and keep your position still to avoid distraction from moving your chair. Overall, I really liked your speech.
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I like your opening! I resonate with it.



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